FINAL STORM REPORT OF THE SEASON!

If you’re reading this on April 4 that means you have power or at least internet. Congratulations!

Our back yard, this morning. The snow has buried the raised garden beds we’d hoped to plant early this year.

Today’s yet another spring surprise, an April storm that forecasters promise will yo-yo from rain to snow to sleet to who knows what.  The wind will blow, the precipitation will be heavy, the roads will be treacherous, power lines will come down. If you aren’t able to read this on April 4, I hope you’re tucked in at home with a good book.

To distract us from what’s happening outside the window, here are some thoughts, observations and news about spring:

MAINE CRIME WAVE is going to be amazing this year. Mark your calendars for Friday evening, June 14 and Saturday, June 15, when the ‘wave rolls through the USM campus in Portland. Michael Koryta is this year’s Crime Master. If you haven’t read any of his New York Times bestselling books, you’re missing out. Here’s a link to his website to give you a sense of Michael and his work: https://www.michaelkoryta.com/

Juliet Grames of SoHo Press is the keynote speaker, and our own Kate Flora will be honored with the Lea Wait Award in memory of our departed but never forgotten dear colleague. There’ll be panels and craft workshops and lots of time to schmooze.  Writers with years of  experience and those just starting out are equally welcome, and so are readers of crime fiction (after all, we do it for you). Maine Crime Wave is a not-to-be-missed event, so register early.

Here’s the link:  https://www.mainewriters.org/calendar/crime-wave-early-bird

Tuesday, before the storm. Sigh.

MARCH MADNESS now spills over into April, and that’s fine with me, especially when the likes of Caitlin Clark (41 points, 12 assists, 7 rebounds against a very talented LSU team earlier this week) and her Iowa Hawkeye teammates are on the TV. The Final Four is this weekend, and like most of the nation, I’ll be tuning in to the women’s games—Iowa v. Connecticut and South Carolina v. North Carolina State—what matchups!  The men’s bracket Final Four bracket is fine, but if you enjoy electric basketball, the women are where it’s at this year.

FLOWERS! They’re blooming under the snow and I have it on good authority that crocus and daffodils are resilient as can be. So when this all melts, they’ll still be around to brighten our winter weary yards.

BIRDS!  The goldfinches are turning blaze yellow (a prettier cousin to blaze orange), red-winged blackbirds have been serenading us for nearly a month, we heard a white-throated sparrow singing her heart out one evening last week and a pair of bluebirds have been regular customers at the mealworm feeder in our yard. Get outside with or without binoculars and watch for migrating birds coming home to Maine for the summer. It’ll cure whatever ails you.

THE ECLIPSE!  Monday afternoon. Don’t miss it, but protect your precious eyes, ok?

MECHANICS HALL in Portland is a treasure, a historic space that features a wonderful library and terrific performance space. Over the past decade it’s become a go-to place for readings and musical events, and pretty much everyone who visits is awed by its historic and present-day value to the community. Last week a $2,860,000 federal grant was announced, money that will support restoration work that’s been ongoing for several years. A press release from the Maine Charitable Mechanics Association thanked Maine’s two U.S. Senators for their leadership in obtaining the funding, which the association said will “enable us to address active leaks threatening the integrity of our 165-year-old building and to repair the iconic clerestory roof and granite exterior. This funding, part of a bill for Maine Community and Economic Development Projects for Fiscal Year 2024, has effectively saved our historic landmark building.”  I say hooray for that. For more information about the Maine Charitable Mechanics Association, its beautiful building and the amazing events that happen there, go here:  https://mechanicshallmaine.org/

THE BOSTON RED SOX are seven games into the season and they are 5-2.  All the pundits are down on them, but I believe they’ll be better than expected this season. The Sox always have been my team and they always will be. I’m not going to say more, because I believe in jinxes as much as the next fan, but Go Sox!

THE BEACH, as readers of this blog know, is one of my favorite places to walk and take photos. Here’s a wash of beautiful spring sunshine on the waves that I hope portends a good season ahead once this final storm is behind us.

Crescent Beach in Cape Elizabeth on Sunday, March 31, when spring was in the air.

Brenda Buchanan brings years of experience as a journalist and a lawyer to her crime fiction. She has published three books featuring Joe Gale, a newspaper reporter who covers the crime and courts beat. She is now hard at work on new projects. FMI, go to http://brendabuchananwrites.com

 

 

 

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Taking a Month Away

Kate Flora: Since my husband began nudging toward retirement, we’ve been taking the month of March away. For years it was on Sanibel, in Florida, until Hurricane Ian wrecked the island. Last year, unable to face the devastation or search for a new place to stay, we went west, and brought rain (one of our special talents) to Santa Barbara, LA, St. George, Utah, and Sedona, Arizona. It was a lovely three weeks of walking in new climates and we loved it. But hearts were still on Sanibel (although not Florida in general) and so this March just past, we spent a month in a rental in Naples.

Naples is one of those places where people drive such expensive cars that I joke a BMW or a Porsche are like Corollas. Bentleys all over the place and jerks with Maseratis roaring around late at night just to hear themselves make noise. The traffic lights are endless, and force us to practice a patience we don’t possess.

But the birds are happy.

Today, I am just out of the car after driving back for the past three days. My sciatica is in full roar. There are piles of stuff everywhere that need to be put away or disposed of or washed or responded to. There are large downed branches everywhere and the gardens are full of pinecones, but luckily no trees came down. Reentry is always a challenge.

And yet, how can I complain about lush foliage, beach walks, visits with good friends, a

trip to the botanical garden, a walk with alligators, or more time to sit by a pool and read? I even got a good start on the next Joe Burgess book, Deliver Us from Evilby trying to stick to a 1000 word a day schedule. I didn’t always make it, but I am 30K into the new book, and enjoying the adventure.

So while I ought to be writing a thoughtful blog about something Maine or writing related, I am reminded that sometimes stepping away from the desk and observing can recharge the creative well. So here are few photos from a walk around Savannah, which is a lovely place to stop and break up the drive. And yes, the white cat is real.

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Finding the Right Cover

Kaitlyn Dunnett/Kathy Lynn Emerson here, today writing as Kathy and following up on my last blog about revising Firebrand, a 1993 historical romance, into historical fiction (tentatively titled Treacherous Visions). The manuscript is now “resting” for at least a month, after which I will do at least one more revision before publishing it in trade paperback format. It is currently 78,514 words in length, down from the 90,628 I started with. The original novel was even longer than that, since I did some judicious cutting when I reissued it as an e-book back in 2005.

It’s at this point that I need to consider cover art. When rights to a piece of writing are returned to the author, that’s all she gets back. The cover art is not included. In this case, that’s just as well. Firebrand had three covers, one for the U.S., one for the U.K., and one for the German edition. None of them were an accurate representation of the book’s content then and they certainly aren’t now. Here’s the original U.S. cover:

And the one from the U.K:

And the German version:

And, oh yes, the cover on the e-book currently available:

So what kind of cover do I want for Treacherous Visions?

The story is set in the 1630s. It starts in London but moves to Colonial New England for most of the action. Everything was wilderness back then, but what is now the State of Maine was even more so. The artwork on the back cover of Firebrand came closest to representing my characters’ Pilgrim neighbors, but again, I can’t use this artwork

Shalla, a novel I wrote for young readers age 8-12 and self-published a couple of years ago, is also set in Colonial New England. In an early incarnation, I created a cover using part of a painting in the public domain, but when it came out as a paperback, I hired someone to design a cover. I’m quite pleased with it, but I don’t want to duplicate it for Treacherous Visions. Here’s my version:

And the one I now use:

At the same time I’ve been working on revising this novel, I’ve also been proofreading and formatting the first book in my Face Down Mystery Series, Face Down in the Marrow-Bone Pie. It should be available very soon in a trade paperback edition, the first print edition since the original hardcover and mass market paperback editions went out of print. The other books in the series will follow. The titles, all starting with the words Face Down, let readers know they are connected, but I also wanted the covers to convey a common theme. Since the books are set in Elizabethan England, I’m using maps published in the sixteenth century—they’ll show the county or city in which that particular mystery takes place. Here’s the first one, designed using Canva by my clever husband.

I’m tempted to use a map background for Treacherous Visions, too, since setting is so important to the story. I have a wonderful 1570 map of the area showing the old place names. Norumbega was the one given to New England and is also the name of the legendary lost city my heroine’s love interest is trying to find.

What do you think? Would this map work as cover art for historical fiction with a hint of the paranormal? Or would it just confuse readers into thinking this novel is part of the Face Down series? Comments and alternate suggestions are very welcome.

 

Kathy Lynn Emerson/Kaitlyn Dunnett has had sixty-four books traditionally published and has self published others. She won the Agatha Award and was an Anthony and Macavity finalist for best mystery nonfiction of 2008 for How to Write Killer Historical Mysteries and was an Agatha Award finalist in 2015 in the best mystery short story category. In 2023 she won the Lea Wait Award for “excellence and achievement” from the Maine Writers and Publishers Alliance. She was the Malice Domestic Guest of Honor in 2014. She is currently working on creating new omnibus e-book editions of her backlist titles. Her website is www.KathyLynnEmerson.com.

 

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Weekend Update: March 30-31, 2024

Next week at Maine Crime Writers there will be posts by Kaitlyn Dunnett/Kathy Lynn Emerson (Monday), Kate Flora (Tuesday), Brenda Buchanan (Thursday) and John Clark (Friday).

In the news department, here’s what’s happening with some of us who blog regularly at Maine Crime Writers:

Matt Cost would like to welcome PIRATE TRAP into the family. This fifth book in the Clay Wolfe/Port Essex Trap series was born on Wednesday, March 27th, at a height of 8.5 inches and a robust weight of 13.4 ounces. Wednesday, April 3rd, Cost will be at the Baxter Library in Gorham speaking about the evolution of Pirate Trap at 6:00 p.m. On Saturday, April 6th, Cost will be on a panel of authors at the Exeter LitFest in New Hampshire playing two truths and one lie at the Sea Dog Brewery at 10 a.m. Kate Flora will also be there.

Kate Flora is both thrilled and astonished to learn she’ll be receiving the Lea Wait Award at the Maine Crime Wave this year. If you haven’t been to the Wave, you’re missing out on a great weekend and a chance to meet authors and hear their tips. Crime writers are a community, and this our Maine gathering.

https://www.mainewriters.org/maine-crime-wave

 

An invitation to readers of this blog: Do you have news relating to Maine, Crime, or Writing? We’d love to hear from you. Just comment below to share.

And a reminder: If your library, school, or organization is looking for a speaker, we are often available to talk about the writing process, research, where we get our ideas, and other mysteries of the business, along with the very popular “Making a Mystery” with audience participation, and “Casting Call: How We Staff Our Mysteries.” We also do programs on Zoom. Contact Kate Flora

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Actually Useful Writing Books

Kate Flora: Over the years, I accumulated quite a library of reference books related to writing, to crime writing in particular, and to crime investigations of all sorts. I never stop acquiring books that someone I regard as credible has suggested. This week I added The Bestseller Code: anatomy of a blockbuster novel. I usually find these unsatisfying but I’ll give it a try. For writers beginning to crime writing journey, Hallie Ephron’s Writing and Selling Your Mystery Novel is a fabulous reference, and one I return to time after time. Also an excellent reference is How to Write a Mystery: a Handbook from Mystery Writers of America. And for writers learning to embrace revision, Elizabeth Lyon’s Manuscript Makeover: Revision Techniques No Fiction Writer Can Afford To Ignore. Of course, I also have a zillion books on injuries, criminal psychology, practical homicide investigation, writing suspense, etc.

 

Kaitlyn Dunnett/Kathy Lynn Emerson: My “how-to” book collection is pitifully small and most of it dates back to the 1970s and 1980s when I was first trying to learn the craft. Those books are both out of print and out of date. So, for what it’s worth, I’m going to plug the writing book I wrote and which I recently reissued in a slightly revised and updated trade paperback edition. It’s also available as an e-book.

HOW TO WRITE KILLER HISTORICAL MYSTERIES won the 2008 Agatha Award for best nonfiction. Marv Lachman, reviewing it in Deadly Pleasures, described it as “the best book about writing mysteries that I have ever read.” Most of my updates are in the sections on self-publishing and marketing, where there have been massive changes in the industry since 2008. All the good stuff is the same.

The original version (which has a different cover) was written while I was still writing my Face Down series, featuring Susanna, Lady Appleton, sixteenth-century gentlewoman, herbalist, and sleuth, and had just published the fourth book in my Diana Spaulding 1888 Quartet. It’s my take on writing historical mysteries, but it also contains input from many other writers of historical mysteries. They include longtime friends like Sharan Newman, Rhys Bowen, and the late Carole Nelson Douglas, who offer their insights into what it takes to mix history with mystery, as well several writers I’ve never met  (Lindsay Davis and Kerry Greenwood, to name just two), who were also extremely generous in offering advice and letting me quote them on a variety of historical-mystery-writing topics.

Kait Carson: Two of my bookshelves are filled with writing books. Some (not many) I’ve read. Mostly, I run my finger across the spines and hope to absorb whatever I need at that moment. There are three I return to again and again. The Emotional Thesaurus by Angela Akerman and Becca Puglisi, helps to vary up the language and provides great show don’t tell language. Chris Roerden’s Don’t Murder your Mystery is the last edit check before the book is ready for prime time beta readers. On Writing by Stephen King. Not for the craft advice, but for the shot of energy it gives me when I’m flagging.

John Clark: For beginning writers, high school students and local adult education classes, I still think What If? Writing Exercises for Fiction Writers Paperback – November 20, 1991 by Anne Bernays (Author), Pamela Painter (Author) is an excellent book to use.


Matt Cost has always been an odd duck. I’ve never read books on writing as I don’t believe that it can be taught, only practiced, honed, and improved through the process. My fear is that writing craft books will swerve me from my own style and take my unique style and mold it into a Christmas cookie. But I do use a variety of books for research! Books on voodoo, cults, Brooklyn, New Orleans, the Civil War, and Joshua Chamberlain. Bonus points if you can match the research books to my written novels.

Jule Selbo here. I have read a lot of  books on story structure – most that focused on screenwriting since that was my profession for many years (books that helped me make my living as a writer which was the best thing ever – for me).

Syd Field’s book, written in 1979, was the first one I grabbed from a bookstore when my playwriting agent told me I had to write for tv and film so “we” could make money. It was helpful – he laid out story structure in a very comprehensible way – and I also got to know Syd a bit and he was a generous with his knowledge.

 

Then I went backwards in time and found Frances Marion’s book (1937, she won an Academy Award for her screenplay – The Champ – in 1931, was best buds with Mary Pickford, wrote comedies and dramas and movies that help change the prison system (The Big House 1930). Her approach was simple, made a big impression on me.

 

Clare Beranger’s – (1950 book, she was a screenwriter in early Hollywood and then started what became USC Film School). Smart, incisive and

 

Then forward again to Chris Vogler (who took Joseph Campbell’s fabulous work and adapted Campbell’s story evolution and ideas to screenwriting). Everything was helpful   – for different reasons. (I think Vogler’s structure layout is best for the classic superhero and epic film stories.)  I even wrote two “how-to” books for screenwriters (structure book (2010) and story genre book (2014) after working in the craft/business for few decades and I still find them helpful because they reflect on I landed on a way to approach story that made sense to me.

When I moved into writing novels, I became obsessed with studying how writers could “keep me reading even when I had other things I needed to do” . For me, there are so many books that are excellent, and then there are the ones that I am not sure if they are excellent – but they drag me back to my reading chair even when I am supposed to be doing something else. And I love trying figure out how the writers of those books “do that”.  Is it their building of characters? Filling out the life of the people/the crime/ the reasoning/the world? Right now – I read and read mysteries/crime novels and re-read the ones that I can’t put down and try to suss out the reasons…

Rob Kelley: As is the case for many writers, Anne Lamott’s Bird by Bird was influential for me with her concept of the shitty first draft. There is something so freeing about getting out of your own way and getting words down on paper. But my new favorite writing advice book isSeven Drafts by Allison K. Wilson, primarily because it helped me have a path for how to fix everything without trying to fix it all at once. She outlines seven drafts: The Vomit Draft (first draft), then describes subsequent ones on plot, character, technical matters,  copy editing, beta reading, and editor reading. In working on my most recent novel, I used them all, plus a few more that helped correct mistakes I always make. It was a great way to have a plan to work against when facing the chaos of a work in progress!

Maggie Robinson: I probably should read each and every one of these. I only took one writing class in college, Persuasive Writing. I don’t believe I ever persuaded anyone of anything, and whatever textbook we used is long gone. Over the years I’ve sat through numerous craft workshops with book suggestions, but like Matt have resisted reading them. Maybe I’m just lazy. However, I can second Kait’s rec of Stephen King’s On Writing, even if I am still shamelessly larding my prose with adverbs.

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When You Can’t See the Forest for the Trees.

It’s a good thing I’m writing this latest novel for spec and not on contract. If I had a deadline, I might turn gray overnight. Oh, wait, I am gray. Okay, bad analogy. That’s fine. The novel is still a hot mess no matter what color my hair may currently be.

I love this book, and the characters. It’s tentatively titled No Return. Here’s the blurb: The North Maine woods keeps its secrets close. When Sassy Romano inherits the Tremayne Lodge and Artist Colony, she knows it has been vacant for the past five years. She isn’t prepared to find it occupied by a body in the pottery studio, or that her childhood home is now the epicenter of a crime wave. Someone is using her properties as half-way houses for illegal immigrants and the narcotics trade. A lot has changed since she’s been away. The deeper she pries into local secrets, the more she realizes they are rooted in her past. And the past can be deadly.

Sounds straightforward. There’s a beginning, a middle, and an end. I know who, what, where, and when. I even know who dun it. That’s epic for me. Often my villain isn’t revealed until sometime into the second (or third) draft. This time, I’ve nailed that sucker. So, what’s the problem?

This is the first book in a new series. That’s a blessing and a curse. It’s fun to create new worlds and meet new imaginary friends and foes. It’s great to explore and take inspiration from new locations. The north Maine woods are made for mystery. It would take a lifetime or two to explore it all. That’s yeast to the creative spirit. The problem, then, is not the setting, or the characters, it’s the story.

The hardest and the most enjoyable part of writing comes after the explosion of words on the page. I’m a “discovery writer.” That’s a nice way to say I travel back roads and paths without a roadmap. I write it as it comes, sometimes multiple chapters at one sitting. Sometimes a few words or sentences. Then I string them all together, stir twice, and see what perks. What usually floats to the top is…a hot mess. That’s where I am now.

I’m deep in the editing process. I spend time sussing out each chapter’s purpose, fixing plot holes, and making sure the foundation supports the overall structure. Multicolored highlights, red ink, and sticky notes cover my pages. In short, right now I’m in the weeds of writing. I know the story is there, but darned if I can make it out.

In another few weeks, all of this will be behind me. I’ll have taken this hot mess and transformed it into a well-ordered story. In the meantime, though, will someone pass the wine?

Writers, do you have a hot mess stage for your works in progress?

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Farewell To My Feline Companion

Charlene D’Avanzo: Last week my husband John and I had to put down our cat Rudy, a beloved longtime friend and mate. He was 16-19 years old when he died. Rudy had been with us for fifteen years, so his loss for both of us is enormous.

Rudy traveled with us from Kansas to Maine and was my companion when John returned to Kansas for work. Together we explored the yard and enjoyed late afternoon summer sun on the deck, watching birds high in pine trees. At night he’d jump up on the bed and sleep at my feet.

Rudy was a loving cat and this quote fits him beautifully:

When tomorrow starts without me

don’t think we are far apart.

For every time you think of me

I am in your heart.

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COST TALKS and PIRATE TRAP by Matt Cost

Pirate Trap arrives Wednesday. March 27th. Much like a C-section, the birth of my book has been predetermined. A year ago, it was just an idea trickling around in my being, but it is about to become a reality. A living, breathing, entity of setting, plot, characters, twists, and turns.

And just like that, I am at the final stage of a writer’s duties, having traversed the entire spectrum of the creation of a book—idea, research, write, edit, market—and now, promotion. This is the chapter of development that is similar to the raising of the child. It is time to introduce Pirate Trap to the world and hope that friendships and respect develop.

Promotion. This is the part of the job that gets me out from behind my computer screen, up and off my butt, and out to visit the general public and introduce them to my book. At this point, three parts of the marketing campaign come to fruition.

Podcast and radio interviews. I have had two so far, one was Sunday Tea with V and the other was for Big Blend Radio. Check out the links to listen to those and more will follow.

Reviewers who have been sent ARCs (advanced reading copies) of Pirate Trap will now be weighing in with their thoughts on the merits of my newborn. This is out of my hands. I hope that they see the beauty of my creation and heap praise, maybe even a tad of adulation, but it is no longer up to me.

The second phase of marketing coming to bear at this time of promotion is that of book talks. In this case, I am calling them COST TALKS. Over the course of April and May, I have arranged twenty-two such events. These are mostly in Maine, and mostly at libraries, but there are a few exceptions to both rules.

These COST TALKS will be me sharing the evolution of Pirate Trap from idea to promotion. The trials and tribulations, the good and the bad, the essence of creation. I will read a short passage (very short). And best of all, I will get to interact with real-live human beings. Not Zoom nor AI nor telephone nor text. Real people.

The most essential part of a Cost Talk is interaction. Audience participation. Question and answer. Comment and criticism. So, please, if you are in the area of one of these COST TALKS, please stop in, weigh in, and have some fun with me. I was just kidding about that criticism part. Don’t really do that.

There will be more COST TALKS in June and July. Check my website for places, dates, and time. Then, in August, they will rev back up with the release of City Gone Askew. COST TALKS. Write on.

 

About the Author

Matt Cost was a history major at Trinity College. He owned a mystery bookstore, a video store, and a gym, before serving a ten-year sentence as a junior high school teacher. In 2014 he was released and began writing. And that’s what he does. He writes histories and mysteries.

Cost has published five books in the Mainely Mystery series, with the fifth, Mainely Wicked, just released in August of 2023. He has also published four books in the Clay Wolfe Trap series, with the fifth, Pirate Trap, due out March 27th, 2024.

For historical novels, Cost has published At Every Hazard and its sequel, Love in a Time of Hate, as well as I am Cuba. In April of 2023, Cost combined his love of histories and mysteries into a historical PI mystery set in 1923 Brooklyn, Velma Gone Awry. City Gone Askew will follow in July of 2024.

Cost now lives in Brunswick, Maine, with his wife, Harper. There are four grown children: Brittany, Pearson, Miranda, and Ryan. A chocolate Lab and a basset hound round out the mix. He now spends his days at the computer, writing.

 

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Weekend Update: March 23-24, 2024

Next week at Maine Crime Writers there will be posts by Matt Cost (Monday), Charlene D’Avanzo (Tuesday), and Kait Carson (Thursday) with a group post on Friday.

In the news department, here’s what’s happening with some of us who blog regularly at Maine Crime Writers:

Matt Cost was recently on the Big Blend Radio podcast speaking about cannibals, cults, pirates, and every crack in between. Check it out HERE. His latest mystery novel in the Clay Wolfe/Port Essex Trap series, Pirate Trap, is pubbing on Wednesday, March 27th. It can be ordered HERE. Cost will be busy touring libraries and other sites speaking of pirates, writing, and reading from Pirate Trap. This is the April schedule. Future months will be posted as we get closer. This can also be found on his website HERE.

An invitation to readers of this blog: Do you have news relating to Maine, Crime, or Writing? We’d love to hear from you. Just comment below to share.

And a reminder: If your library, school, or organization is looking for a speaker, we are often available to talk about the writing process, research, where we get our ideas, and other mysteries of the business, along with the very popular “Making a Mystery” with audience participation, and “Casting Call: How We Staff Our Mysteries.” We also do programs on Zoom. Contact Kate Flora

 

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What’s that Smell?

Walking the Maxwell Farm loop the other morning, I caught a vagrant whiff of cows on the breeze and I don’t mean cows’ breath. I had a teacher once who insisted that the shit of ungulates was not offensive, but he wasn’t a dairyman and I suspect had never been inside a cow barn in deep August. But the encounter reminded me how evocative smells are and how they are sometimes lost in the welter of other kinds of description we use in our writing.

Petrichor—love the sound of that word—is the smell of earth after a rain. History has it that the reason we might find the scent so pleasant is that in ancient times, it would have made us aware that rain had fallen after a long dry period, a boon to life. But beyond that explanation, I would bet you smelled it the instant I named it.

I do wonder if some of the more evocative scents of my youth are lost to most people. I wouldn’t recommend it necessarily, but I can recall the specific odor of the outhouse at my uncle’s farm in Starks, a mix of everything you’d expect overlain with the acrid smell of powdered lime. Who will be left in thirty years who will remember that smell?

There are smells that speak to us of danger, or at least caution: gasoline, propane. I remember the stink of kerosene in the stove in the Waterville apartment I lived in my first year out of college and wondering if my roommate and I were ruining our lungs. Of course both of use smoked at the time. Chlorine reminds me of days at the pool in the YMCA and the L Street Bathhouse, my unremarkable athletic career except for the one race I won that no one expected me to.

What makes smell so evocative is its connection to memory. The olfactory cortex in the brain is in the temporal lobe, which is the location that manages emotion and creates meaning. A single scent—a perfume, say—recalls a person, which opens up an entire section of memory, a flood of imagery.

Which makes it odd that you don’t see as much of it in writing as I’d think would be useful. Could it be that the association to a smell is too personal to ascribe to a fictional character without a ton of explanation? Just because I have a specific memory attached to Cinnabar perfume, can I render that believably in prose? Or is it that the memory reaction is a nonrational response, so the best a writer can do, without getting all weird and flowery, is say something like “the smell reminded her of . .” which is both clunky and interrupts the flow of the story?

There are the moments when a smell is an entire story. What smells trigger your memories? Your stories?

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