I’ve been thinking a lot about the craft of writing lately.
I’m taking a New Noir workshop with Tom Andes, whose story “Never Mind in Two-Thousand” was included in the Best American Mystery and Suspense 2025, edited by Don Winslow.
For the workshop, we’ve been reading stories or chapters by writers like Elmore Leonard, Megan Abbott, S.A. Cosby, Jordan Harper, James M. Cain, Steph Cha, Raymond Chandler, James Sallis, and Vicki Hendricks. Usually there’s some direction to pay specific attention to a key craft element. For example, last week we looked at indirect and direct dialogue. Then we either wrote or revised a piece of writing with that craft element in mind.
My two favorite stories so far, which will be a surprise to approximately nobody, were Megan Abbott’s “Cheer” and James Sallis’s “Drive.” Both of these writers later extended their stories into full-length novels, and both were later adapted for the screen.
In some ways these stories are on opposite ends of the spectrum. “Drive” is written in a more distant third person. “Cheer” is deep first. “Drive” is about a getaway driver who is deeply embedded in all sorts of criminal enterprises. “Cheer” is about a really dysfunctional teenage cheer team. I mean really, really dysfunctional.
During the second part of the workshop, we for read up to three minutes of something we’ve written while everyone else listens for what they notice. Afterward, we have one minute to reflect on what we remember. Then we move to the next writer. At the end of this, we share what resonated with us in each piece of writing.
There is something powerful about listening deeply to other people share their work.
Through doing these exercises, there are two things that stay with me in stories.
1.) One perfect, telling detail
I recently listened to Michael Connelly discuss this idea. He was shadowing a homicide detective and noticed a very specific behavior that was very telling. When the detective would look through the files or listen to reports of a crime, he would take off his glasses and the part that goes behind his ear between his teeth. Connelly said that he noticed a groove in the glasses where this behavior had clearly happened over time.
In listening to my fellow workshop participants’ stories, I noticed the same thing. The girl with three dollars and nineteen cents in her front pocket. The apartment door with the tacky spring wreath that is still up at Christmas. The woman who only wears Talbots, full price.
These details tell us so much about characters in economical and precise ways.
2.) Dialogue
After I read and listened to SMALL MERCIES, I binged all sorts of Dennis Lehane interviews. He does dialogue so well. When he talks about dialogue, he says some of it comes from listening. His father used to take him around to pubs, and he’d overhear all sorts of banter. The cadence of somebody telling a story over a beer. Or, in Megan Abbott’s story, two teenagers going back and forth about blackmailing their cheer coach. Or, in one participant’s story, a back-and-forth between two guys outside a Dollar General.
I am now very curious about how other people experience workshops, what has been effective for them in terms of pushing their craft or their thinking, or what other craft elements resonate.
September Highlights So Far…
I had a great conversation with fellow Maine Crime Writer Robert T. Kelley and Margot Anne Kelley in the amazing library at Tenants Harbor. The location was beautiful, the audience was great, and I enjoyed our conversation.
I also got to chat with Dick Cass about his latest series, which is set in Maine. We had a full house, ate a lot of cake, and really enjoyed the audience. Fellow crime writers Bruce Robert Coffin, Brenda Buchanan, Chris Holm, Ryan Lowell, Allison Keeton, and Jule Selbo were all at Longfellow’s Books. They also ate cake. Definitely check out Dick’s Theberge series if you haven’t yet.
Upcoming Events…
Are you going to be in Portland on 9/29? I hope you can join an amazing crew at the Portland Public Library’s downtown branch for a Mystery Making event. Included: Dick Cass, Jule Selbo, Matt Cost, and Ryan Lowell (author of one of my favorite 2026 debut releases, FREIGHT).
Are you in the Bangor area on 9/30? I hope you can join us for a Noir at the Bar at Barliman’s. It’s going to be a great group of new voices (Mo Drammeh, Katie York, Lucas Brilliant, Laura Giebfried and Stanley R. Wells, Amber Hathaway, Tori Hood, and Cory Magee) and a few old friends (Matt Cost and Moe Claire).
Upcoming Author Interviews:
A few of my favorite recent authors will be sharing a little about their upcoming projects including Edgar Award-winning Henry Wise, author of PROMISED LAND and HOLY CITY.
In PROMISED LAND, deputy sheriff Will Seems investigates a missing person case and is forced to confront the way history anchors, corrupts, and defines power.
William Boyle, who I’ve already waxed poetic about SAINTS OF THE NARROWS STREET, will share a little about his upcoming book, HEAVY SUGAR.
It’s described as a “zany, foul-mouthed, and tender-hearted screwball noir about a stolen baseball and the lengths people will go to find it. And themselves.”
Finally, former Maine Crime Writers blogger Paul Doiron is going to share a little about his journey from his days writing for this blog to his continued success with the Mike Bowditch series.
You can read the backlog of his posts HERE.

Upcoming Release
Megan Abbott shared a cover reveal for her upcoming book. Available next summer. THE DEAR ONES is about the way the disappearance of two young girls haunts a small town’s close-knit community. In the years that follow, a string of brutal crimes and strange accidents leaves the community reeling. When two stars from the field hockey disappear before the big game, the rest of the team is determined to uncover the truth.
It sounds like peak Megan Abbott, and I cannot wait!
Pre-orders are available now.
Be well and talk soon.


Next week at Maine Crime Writers there will be posts by Joe Souza (Monday), Gabi Stiteler (Tuesday), Jule Selbo (Thursday), and Brenda Buchanan (Friday).



Saying farewell to the land that mattered so much to our parents was a truly bittersweet occasion. Yes, with buy-in from all the beneficiaries of the family trust, that below market sale protects that land for future generations and recognizes how much our parents loved that piece of land. But it meant letting go of so many of the places that were an integral part of our childhood.

Both our parents were eager and willing to show us the details of our world. There was lovely clay on the banks of the stream that ran along the back of the orchard. We could collect it and make little pots. Of course, without a kiln, they would eventually crumble, but the creation was the fun. Turning over logs to see what lay beneath, like sow bugs. Scratching our names in the fungi that grew like slates from the trees. Spotting the many types of mushrooms that burst from rotten logs. Finding bones or animal skulls or the distinct tracks of different animals.





Kate Flora: I confess that I didn’t read my book. I listened to the audio book while I was doing some of that driving to libraries. The Maine Turnpike is a lot more bearable when someone is reading to me. My choice for one great book is Ann Patchett’s Whistler. For a writer like me, whose books are usually linear, it was interesting to “read” a book that has flashbacks and time shifts, as this one does. But from the moment that the narrator, Daphne, encounters her first stepfather, Eddie, in a museum, I was hooked. Probably in part because from the moment she starts telling the story of their car accident on a winter’s night when she was nine, and how she and Eddie handle it, I was hooked. It was so interesting to find a work of fiction not in the crime genre that made me lean in because I had to know what would happen. So, when you’re not reading one of our books, I urge you to give it a try.
Gabriela Stiteler: I’ve read a number of great books this summer, but the standout for me is SMALL MERCIES by Denis Lehane. Set in Boston in the summer of 1974 against the backdrop of bussing and school integration, the story mostly follows Mary Pat, a tough Southie mother in search of her missing daughter. While plot and setting are important, it’s the characters that drive the story. Mary Pat’s arc, which is at times painful, is rendered with real care and compassion. While gritty and dealing with relevant issues (racism, brokenness, community-sanctioned violence), Lehane somehow manages to communicate a real faith in the capacity of people to learn, grow, and change. I read the book and then immediately listened to the audiobook and would recommend both. Lehane has indicated that this may be his last novel, and if that is true, it’s a heck of a way to go out.







Next week at Maine Crime Writers there will be posts by Kaitlyn Dunnett/Kathy Lynn Emerson (Tuesday), Kate Flora (Thursday), and John Clark (Friday),with a group post on Monday.

Ernest Hemingway wrote each morning just after dawn and continued until he came to a place where he knew what would happen next. Then he stopped and tried to make it through the rest of the day. His early morning start time makes one wonder about the truth of his allegedly voracious appetite for drink. But then, maybe that’s why he stopped when he knew what was coming next. The buzz was wearing off. Suddenly his writing advice of “write drunk, edit sober” makes perfect sense—for Hemingway.
Fellow Mainer Stephen King claims he begins his writing day with a slice of creamy cheesecake he refers to as ‘brain food’. Why do I think King’s tongue was firmly in his cheek when he told that to an interviewer? Maybe because Bangor, Maine, for all that it’s a lovely place, is not exactly known for its cheesecake. Now, a Whoopie pie, okay, I could believe that. On the other hand, his author son Owen claims he plumps for crème brûlée before he hits the keyboard. I ask you, who are these people?
Victor Hugo wrote in the buff. He famously instructed his servant to hide his clothes so he couldn’t leave the house until his writing work was done. Guess that’s one cure for writer’s block.


















