The Dog in the Room

Dorothy Cannell: I currently have on my refrigerator a photo of an eleven-day-old

Not Dorothy's puppy, but another dog eager to become someone's pet

Not Dorothy’s puppy, but another dog eager to become someone’s pet

Cavalier King Charles puppy, eyes still sealed shut and a bald nose. His name is Watson. I know that because I chose it after asking my dog loving daughter-in-law, Cindy, to search on line for a reputable breeder. Mission accomplished when she found one in Connecticut with a female expecting a litter. Last Sunday afternoon Cindy brought round the photo along with another of the mother as a puppy, delightedly she informed me Watson should be ready to bring home in eight-weeks-time again. After positioning the photo and stepping back to yearn over it, I was filled with the belief that life had acquired a wonderful new dimension. The dampening question was: would this view be fully shared by rest of the household?

I broke the news of the soon-to-be bundle of joy to Teddy our ten-year-old Cavalier and Simeon our two-year-old Siamese cat, and neither threatened to pack their bags and leave in protest. Teddy enjoys being with his own kind, and Simeon thinks he’s a dog – coming when called, sitting up to beg for treats, and following my husband Julian and me from room to room in terror of never seeing us again. I had counted on a positive response from the four footed members of the family, but knew not to expect leaps of joy from Julian.

When I broached the subject of a getting puppy several months ago, he was flatly against it. At that time we had a second cat (sadly she died recently of old age) and he said we had enough pets, also he didn’t want to go through the bother of house training, but he did finally threw up his hands and agreed. The fair and sensible thing for me to have done would have been to let him know I’d put Cindy on the search, but I persuaded myself it was best not to ripple the waters until there was something to report. And now here I was feeling defensive, torn between righteousness and guilt.

What does this personal anecdote have to do with writing? It’s an answer to the question: “Do you draw upon the traits of people you know when creating characters?” There are moments when I listen to people talking and observe their behavior, and wonder: do you ever think how unappealingly you would come across in a book?” In the situation above would that person be the husband crushing his wife’s spirit, draining all the joy out of life? Or would she be the unsympathetic one – sneaky, manipulative, intent on having her own way, never considering the wants or needs of others?

The husband doesn’t flesh out, but there is meat on the wife’s bones. Where better to mine for unlikeable traits than within myself? I have a place for her in my next book. I shall call her Mildred because she has emotionally mildewed over the years. Of course I’ll change her physically, so I won’t risk having to sue myself.

As for Julian’s reaction to the Watson revelation? It was cheerful. He said he looked remarkably intelligent for eleven-days-old and it should be elementary to housetrain him. That’s the thing about characters in books – they should always be able to surprise us. I’ll have to find out how Mildred can do that for me… she must have some nice qualities. Maybe, as I said to Simeon, she likes cats. Siamese ones.

screen-shot-2016-09-27-at-4-16-33-pmThat’s it for now, I have to exclaim enthusiastically over the miniature pig someone with a name beginning with ‘J’ insisted on getting, saying he felt entitled to a pet of his own. Some of us should really listen to ourselves once in a while.

Best, Dorothy.


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What Am I Up To?

Hi. Barb here and thank you so much for asking.

I have an embarrassment of riches in the last quarter of 2016–two books launching!

Eggnog Murder CompEggnog Murder is coming October 25, 2015 in hardcover, ebook, and audio. (Large print is coming later). The book is a collection of holiday novellas by Leslie Meier, Lee Hollis, and me, based on each of our Maine-based cozy mystery series. In a starred review, Publishers Weekly said, “This anthology boasts three terrific tales of yuletide murder in coastal Maine…It’s not just the nog: sparkly writing, and emotional depth link this trio of holiday cozies.” About my contribution to the collection, “Nogged Off,” PW said, “…a creepily convincing tale of tinsel-decked, cookie-scented psychopathology.” (Which I kind of love as a description.)

I call this book Maine Clambake Mystery #4.5 because my story, “Nogged Off” picks up right after Fogged Inn ends. When Julia travels to New York City to empty her apartment, she meets her subtenant and things spiral out of control. I loved incorporating the holiday traditions from my Maine coastal town, as well as some from my family.

IcedunderfrontcoverIced Under releases on December 27, 2016. Here’s the description:

The snow is deep in Maine’s Busman’s Harbor and the mighty rivers are covered in ice. Snowden Family Clambake Company proprietor Julia Snowden and her mother, Jacqueline, are hunkered down for the winter when a mysterious package arrives—heating up February with an unexpected case of murder . . .

I loved writing this story of how Julia Snowden’s mother’s family made the money that enabled them to build their mansion on private Morrow Island, and how they lost it. I hope my readers love it, too.

To support these books, I have a busy fall lined up. Here’s a list of upcoming appearances.

Friday, September 30, through Saturday, October 1, 2016

I’ll appear with a host of other Maine mystery authors at Murder by the Book

Jesup Memorial Library
34 Mount Desert Street
Bar Harbor, ME 04609

Saturday, October 8, 2016, from 9:00 am to 6:00 pm

I’ll appear with a host of other mystery writers at Mysterium: The Mystery Novel Conference.  (Registration required.) I’ll teach a course in Revising Your Mystery and moderate the cozy mystery panel.

Wesleyan University
Usdan University Center
45 Wyllis Ave
Middletown CT, 06459

October 26, 2016 at 7:00 pm

I’ll participate with Maine authors Kate Flora and Lea Wait in “Death and Desserts.”

South Berwick Public Library
27 Young Street
South Berwick, Maine 03908
Phone: 207-384-3308

Saturday, November 5, 2016 at 1:00 pm

I’ll speak and sign with author Lea Wait at

Sherman’s Maine Coast Bookshop and Cafe
158 Main Street
Damariscotta, ME 04543
Phone: 888-563-3207

Sunday, November 6, 2016, 3:00 to 5:00 pm

I’ll be reading and signing with most of the Maine Crime Writers at

Bull Feeney’s
375 Fore St
Portland, ME 04101

Friday, November 11, through Sunday, November 13, 2016

I’ll appear at the New England Crime Bake (Registration Required). I’ll be moderating a panel on Creating Your Town.

Hilton Boston/Dedham
25 Allied Drive
Dedham, MA 02026

I’m looking forward to my busy fall and would love to see any Maine Crime Writers readers at any of these events!









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Where Did The Summer Go?

VaughnAs I sit here on the evening of the first day of autumn, watching this year’s potato crop being harvested, I can’t help but ask, “Where did the summer go?” Up here in The County we joke that “I overslept one day in May and missed the entire summer!” Still every year we watch the leaves turn color, begin cleaning our shotguns and rifles, and face the fact that in two months (a mere eight weeks) we could be dealing with our first snowfall of the winter. I realize that since June I have done barely a single paragraph of writing and do a mental inventory of what I accomplished since June.

There were a number of appearances, eight at Thursdays On Sweden in Caribou, one in Freeport, 4th of July in Belgrade lakes with several other Crime Writers. There were three appearances at Aroostook County libraries and The Potato Blossom Festival in Fort Fairfield–and then there was the thing that consumed the greatest block of my time. On June 6 my nephew passed away in Florida. Usually a funeral would only take a few days, but not this one (sometimes I think that all it would take to complicate a roll call in a one-man submarine is for me to be involved).

Richard, or Rick as we called him, was fighting cancer and in strong denial of his inevitable demise. He was a life-long bachelor with no children and more importantly no will. His mother, my 88 year-old sister-in-law, had no idea how she was to handle things. You’ve heard the expression “Once a Marine; always a Marine”? I of course saw her dilemma and rode to her rescue. What I assumed would take a week, two at the most, is still an open issue. Dealing interstate with this stuff will drive one to the nearest bottle of Makers Mark! It is now September 22 and we have finally made enough progress that we can see the end of the process…

Guess what? I just found out where my summer went! Now that fall is here I hope to have some  time for myself–once I finish winterizing the house that is…


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Weekend Update: September 24-25, 2016

fallsbooks1Next week at Maine Crime Writers there will be posts by Vaughn Hardacker (Monday), Barb Ross (Tuesday), Dorothy Cannell (Wednesday), John Clark (Thursday), and Kate Flora (Friday).

In the news department, here’s what’s happening with some of us who blog regularly at Maine Crime Writers:

Saturday, September 24, 1:30 – 3:00, Bruce Robert Coffin will be at Soldier’s Memorial Library, 85 Main Street, Hiram, ME.


On Wednesday evening, September 28, from 6:30 to 8:00, Chris Holm will be reading and signing at Raymond Village Library in Raymond, Maine.

Many of us will be at the Jesup Library in Bar Harbor next Friday evening and Saturday for Murder by the Book:








The August winner of a bag of books is Sheryl Booth of Portland . . . Tennessee.

An invitation to readers of this blog: Do you have news relating to Maine, Crime, or Writing? We’d love to hear from you. Just comment below to share.

And a reminder: If your library, school, or organization is looking for a speaker, we are often available to talk about the writing process, research, where we get our ideas, and other mysteries of the business. Contact Kate Flora

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Interview with Author Brian Thiem

Bonjour, fellow readers and scribes. Bruce Robert Coffin here with a real treat. This month I’m pleased to introduce friend, author, and former crime fighter Brian Thiem.

Brian, author of the acclaimed series debut Red Line, spent 25 years with the Oakland Police Department, working Homicide as a detective sergeant and later as the commander of the Homicide Section. He also spent 28 years of combined active and reserve duty in the Army, retiring as a Lieutenant Colonel. His final assignment was a tour in Iraq as the Deputy Commander of the Criminal Investigation Group (CID) for the Middle East. His second novel, Thrill Kill, was released last month. So, without further ado, here’s Brian Thiem!


Tell us a bit about your latest novel, Thrill Kill.
Cops in Oakland seldom meet people whose lives are going well. That’s certainly the case when homicide sergeant Matt Sinclair recognizes the dead woman hanging from a tree as a teenage runaway named Dawn he arrested ten years before. And as Sinclair and his partner, Cathy Braddock, soon learn, many of Dawn’s clients, not to mention the local and federal officials who protect them, will go to any length to keep the police from digging into her past. Then the killer goes public, and Sinclair and Braddock must race to uncover the secrets Dawn was killed to protect before the killer unleashes a major attack on a scale the city has never seen before.


You’ve written two books in this series, Red Line and now Thrill Kill. How did this series come to be? Was it envisioned from the start as a series or were you thinking one off? Please tell us a bit about the origin.
I always liked reading series. Two of my favorites were Michael Connelly’s Harry Bosch novels and John Sandford’s Lucas Davenport books, so when I began writing my first novel in a writing workshop years ago, the idea of a series was always in the back of my mind. However, I never dreamed a publisher would be interested in one of my books, much less a series. I felt I had a great character in Matt Sinclair, and when I finished the novel that would eventually become Red Line, I knew Sinclair was strong enough to carry a series. I was thrilled when my agent, Paula Munier, and my publisher, Crooked Lane Books, agreed.

What do you feel are the main theme(s) of each book?
There’s an overarching theme of justice will always prevail in every book because that’s what Matt Sinclair is all about. He is a sort of modern-day knight, a protector of the weak, which in a homicide case is often the deceased victim. He must speak for the dead and achieve justice on their behalf. But he has an even higher purpose—that of bringing the killer to justice because when people can murder with impunity, society crumbles. An additional theme in Red Line centers on regrets from our past. Partly because of Sinclair’s alcoholism, he failed to solve a past murder, which may have been a reason for the murders occurring in this story. Questions that arise include: can one make amends for past misdeeds, are we responsible for every consequence of our past actions, and can one forgive himself for things he’d done. These same themes come into play in Thrill Kill, in addition to Sinclair’s need to save the people he’s sworn to protect and serve in a city where murder is a fact of life.

Why do you feel this is important, and what would you want a reader to take away from reading these books?
I’m careful not to force feed anything to readers. However, at the same time, I don’t apologize for writing books where cops are the good guys. I hope readers get a glimpse at what it’s like to be a cop in a violent urban environment, the toll it takes on those who carry a badge and gun for a living, how they struggle to maintain their humanity amidst the violence and despair, and how they somehow step up and fight the heroic battles when called upon to do so.


I understand you’re working on the third book in the series. What can you tell us about it?
Detective Matt Sinclair will stop at nothing to find the killers of his former partner in Shallow Grave. When the coroner’s office uncovers a body buried in a shallow grave, homicide sergeant Matt Sinclair expected to find the body of one of the city’s drug dealers, probably eliminated by a rival. Instead, the victim was Phil Roberts, his former partner and the present commander of the department’s intelligence unit. Police brass want a quick clearance and to pin the murder on a dead member of an outlaw motorcycle gang, but Sinclair and his partner, Cathy Braddock, aren’t satisfied. As Sinclair uncovers the details of Roberts’s past, secrets from his work and personal life come to life—secrets that some people will go to any length to keep buried. But Sinclair won’t stop until he finds the truth, even if it means sacrificing his career and destroying his former partner’s reputation.

What makes a good book or engaging story?
Jeez, I wish I knew the secret formula. I know there must be a main character that readers care about. That is doubly important for a series. Readers come back and read future books in the series to find out more about Matt Sinclair and his friends, see how their lives are going, and how they will solve the next murder they’re assigned. Unlike the real world where I didn’t solve every murder case I was assigned, I prefer my books have a more “happy ending.” I think readers of crime fiction like a world that’s set right again in the end, so Sinclair solves the murder in every book and brings the killer(s) to justice, either in handcuffs or a body bag. And in a future book, he might even get the girl in the end.

You’ve already had two very distinguished careers. You’ve served overseas in the military and at home on a police force. Do you think these experiences have added depth to your writing? How?
Gosh, yes! There are very few of us, Bruce Robert Coffin is one of the others, who can write authentic cop thrillers because we lived the life. If I write about my character searching a dark house for an armed man, I know what it feels like. I know what it’s like to work a case for days on end, living on a few hours of sleep and caffein, with the brass constantly on me for a quick clearance. I know Glocks don’t have safeties and revolvers don’t have clips, and I know what it’s like to having your life depend on how well you can use them. I know how cops think and act, how cars behave when taking a corner too fast in a pursuit, and what it feels like to fight for your life and to be afraid to die. I try to inject that in my writing.

Are there writers with similar themes to yours? Who are your influences (can be writers, or even artists, musicians, or others) and what is it about their work that attracts you?
I’ve already mentioned Michael Connelly and John Sandford. I like books with heroes who are thrust into difficult situations and rise to the occasion no matter the odds. Two authors in the military/counter terrorism thriller genre who do that extremely well are Brad Thor and Brad Taylor, and two of my favorite Maine crime series authors are Paul Doiron and Kate Flora. All of these main characters have a creed by which they live their lives. It’s why they do what they do.

Is storytelling mostly entertainment, or does it serve other functions? Do you have particular goals other than telling a good story?
We’ve already touched on this when you asked about theme, but I think good fiction must first be entertaining. That’s why most people read fiction. I think writers must be careful if they’re trying to use fiction to educate readers or sway them to their way of thinking. Few readers want to be lectured to or feel as if they’re being indoctrinated in a political philosophy. However, my point of view character is a big city homicide detective. He sees the world as good guys (cops) and bad guys (crooks). He acknowledges there are bad cops, but they’re a small percentage of the profession, so if readers believe all cops are racists who strive to kill innocent people because they saw a few instances of such on the news, they should probably be reading another genre.

Any other goals you’ve set for yourself, professionally or personally?
Play a round of golf with no greater than double bogie on my worst hole. No, seriously, I just try to do the next right thing. I’ve found that when I do that and leave the outcome to someone else, the results are better than I’ve ever achieved when I try to run the show.

Some writers write fast and claim not to rewrite much. Do you do this, or painstakingly revise? When you send the book off to the publisher, are you happy with it, or just tired of it?
Neither. I painstakingly plot my novels, so when I finally sit down to write, I know where they story is going and what the next scene is. It changes and evolves as I write, but if it gets too far from the plot I had outlined, I revise the plot. Once my first draft is finished, the story is pretty solid, so rewrites primarily consist of layering in descriptions, character thoughts and feelings, and word and sentence changes to improve clarity. When I send it to my publisher, I’m tired of it. In the previous month, I’ve read it through three or four times and need a break from it. When my editor sends it back a month or so later with editorial comments, I’m excited about it once again and ready to revise it to make it better.

Do you have good editors, and if so, how do they help you? Do they look for particular things? Do you have different people for different editing levels?
I use my writers groups for parts of the story I know are either incredibly good or a disaster. When my story is finished, my agent reads it and tells me what it needs—normally more action and emotion. My publisher has wonderful editors. They tear it apart and give me suggestions on how to make it better. After I revise it, the publisher has a copyeditor go through it, and I go through the hundreds of edits and comments the copyeditor came up with.

If an aspiring writer came to you for advice, what words of wisdom would you offer?
Read a lot and write a lot. Find people who can offer constructive criticism, either through writers groups, writing workshops, or university writing programs. Make sure you know why you write. If it’s to seek fame and fortune, find another pursuit.

Stories can be told using a variety of different mediums. Can you see your book as a film, audio, etc.? How would that alter the telling?
My books come out in audio as well as print and e-books, and I don’t think there’s any altering necessary. If my books ever make it to Hollywood, I’ll take the advice of a bestselling author—drive to the California border, accept the check and throw your book to the other side. If one of my books is made into a movie or TV series, it’s no longer my book, it is merely a book that inspired a film.

What’s the next step in your writing world? Where do you hope to go from here?
Ask my agent and publisher. I do what they suggest.


Where can folks purchase your novels?
They’re carried in most bookstores, but since I’m not an A-list author, most only stock them for a few months after release. Of course, they’re available online through Amazon, Barnes & Noble, and others.

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Twitter: @brianthiem
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