Kate Flora: When my boys were little, we used to have word lists posted on the
refrigerator both to improve their vocabularies, and to encourage creativity and kindness in their name-calling. Lists that began: Don’t call your brother an idiot, instead try…followed by all sorts of possibilities. It’s not my fault. My family has always had a fascination with word play. My brother John is the world’s best (or worst) punster, and I own a zillion books about word origins and the development of language. Growing up there was always a dictionary within reach of the dinner table and my boys grew up the same way. I even have (of course) the giant two volume Oxford English Dictionary—the one with the little drawer and a magnifying glass—and I use it. It’s more fun to know both the definition and the origin of a word.
Once, early in the Thea Kozak series, I had a list on the wall of a dozen words for pain—she was always mixing it up with the bad guys—and another time it was pages of words for colors. Plenty of words for the seasons. The weather. What can I say? I’m a writer. I like words.
One wonderful recent gift from my son was a book to help with describing the landscape called Home Ground. Another that gets pulled off the shelf is Word Painting: A Guide to Writing More Descriptively. And a third is an old college textbook, much underlined, called Fine Frenzy: Enduring Themes in Poetry.
This week, the sudden, and unwanted, nip in the air sent me scurrying to my trusty Rodale’s Synonym Finder for words to describe what is happening, thinking it would be fun to share some of them with you, and Rodale’s was a bust.
I looked up autumn and got fall and harvest. I looked up equinox and it wasn’t there at all.
Undaunted, I grabbed my Bartlett’s, source of a hundred epigrams, and sighed with relief. Words, crunchy, powerful, evocative words. There are those who see autumn as sadness and an end, and those for whom it is a time of ripening and crescendo. I often turn to poetry when I’m searching for a description or a word or a phrase to underscore a mood.
Arthur Symons give us:
The gray-green stretch of sandy grass,
Indefinitely desolate;
A sea of lead, a sky of slate;
Already autumn in the air, alas!
And Matthew Arnold:
Coldly, sadly descends
The autumn evening. The field,
Strewn with its dank yellow drifts
Of withered leaves, and the elms,
Fad into dimness apace
And Tennyson captures what my small boys would have described as “happy sad,”
Tears, idle tears, I know not what they mean,
Tears from the depths of some divine despair
Rise in the heart, and gather to the eyes,
In looking on the happy autumn fields,
And thinking of the days that are no more
As does Shelley:
Make me thy lyre, even as the forest is:
What if my leaves are falling lit its own!
The tumult of thy mighty harmonies
Will take from both a deep, autumnal tone,
Sweet, though in sadness.
John Dryden gives us a good phrase for aging long:
Of no distemper, of no blast he died.
But fell like autumn fruit that mellowed
long—
For some of us, autumn is a season for slowing down, and contemplation, as in this, from Thomas Hood:
I saw old Autumn in the misty morn
Stand shadowless like silence, listening to silence
And Laura St. Martin, in “As I Look Out” captures the transition from summer into fall:
As I look out from the desk window
Fingering the new books
I see a quiet afternoon
Caught in a crack between summer and fall
Summer is evaporating on the lawns
And I watch in deep brown anticipation
As the fog which held that last warm night
Takes away the flowered dresses
Suntanned legs and swimming pools
Thin clouds and sunlight argued over the morning
Mornings that still whisper bandanas and beaches
But Fall will have it all soon
When her sharp breath blows away any lingering
And sends us scurrying back to schoolhouses all bundled up
Scurrying back to realities and glories on the wane
These writers remind us to slow down and contemplate the world around us. There is no better time for that than in fall, as the leaves turn, the fields grow golden, pumpkins ripen, and the last tomatoes struggle to turn red.
Do you have “fall” word that you like? A poem, a quote, and phrase that comes to mind as the days shorten and the air grows cool?
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Thank you, lovely post.
Warm rustiness like late autumn leaves
What a great description. I’ve never thought of leaves rusting but that’s sometimes how it looks.
Loved this column! I did encourage my children to use their vocab but some of your methods were splendid, would have loved to use them! Thanks for a great column.
You’re welcome. I had a very creative mother…and she started it.
kate
Nice words! Ponyboy in the Outsiders reciting “Nothing Gold Can Stay” by Robert Frost has always been a mainstay. To me, it means, enjoy the moment. Write on.
Read the book. Saw the movie. And now it’s what? A musical? Hard to imagine.
A sussuration of leaves, pillowing the ground.
Oh yes. Your words or a quote?
My own words.
See the geese in chevron flight a laughin’ and a racin’ on before the snow. They’ve got the urge for goin’ and they have the wings to go. Tom Rush
Lady Goldenrod is swaying in the soft September air…with a crown of gold to wear.
Autumn soon will deceive her. He will steal her gold and leave her just a maiden all forlorn. Old English song from my Nana
Moving on or staying put, a distinct morning chill and comfortable warmth in the afternoon sun, soft then crisp turn of vegetation, relaxing greens of summer segue to the vibrant colors of fall. It is a season of sharp contrasts.
Julianne Spreng from Ohio
These are great. Thanks for sharing. Saw Tom Rush in concert a million years ago, and always loved this song.
Kate
To encourage vocabulary expansion, we used to play a game called ‘stump the chump’ (based on the game from Car Talk, with me being the chump), where the kids would try to find a word in the dictionary I did not know. They searched high and low, and learned a lot along the way.
I don’t have any original words on Autumn, but a million years ago I had to memorize October’s Party by George Cooper. I recite that as my ode to fall.
I’ll check it out. Thanks for the tip.
My mother would always say “the chill catches your breath,” so I would clamp
my hand over my mouth as I was afraid of some strange hand grabbing at me when outdoors in fall.
Growing up within fetch of the apple fields of upstate NY, meant the fall air had the sharp scent of wine, made all the more pronounced by biting into a crisp apple fresh from the tree.