I have been on a run with short stories the past few years. Five sold to Ellery Queen in the past three years. Two to Alfred Hitchcock. Luck with four other collections or anthologies. A piece of flash fiction in Shotgun Honey. The last two years, I’ve been short-listed for the Best American Mystery and Suspense, nominated for the Robert L. Fish Award by the Mystery Writers of America for my first short story, and recipient of the Bodwell Fellowship for the Maine Writers and Publisher Alliance.
Lately, I’ve been working on something longer about Pittsburgh in the 1980s. I was born in Pittsburgh and grew up in northwestern PA. Erie. Pittsburgh. Waterford. Greensburg. Somerset. Windber. With dairy farms and coal mines and lake effect snow.
I’m still asking a lot of the same questions about family and loyalty and independence. Still thinking about what sorts of lines a person is willing to cross for the people they love.
The process has been very rewarding. But it’s also been tough.
Specifically, staying in a groove.
As I’ve mentioned, I have two kids. They are great. My two favorite things. Funny and fun and very active. But kids require food and water and attention. They have sporting interests and other interests not related to sports. Which means my afternoon, evening, and weekend routines are not regular. But I’m still getting it done. I knocked out a scene sitting on the floor at my younger son’s basketball practice. I knocked out another scene at my older son’s batting practice at the Picklr in Westbrook where there is a secret batting practice in a creepy back room.
I travel a lot for my job. It’s good, hard work. But my routine is finding an hour at the end of the day and an hour in the morning and an hour on a plane. I’ve drafted scenes at hotel rooms in Storrs and Easton, Connecticut, in Warwick, Rhode Island, or on an island in Maine. I’ve reworked them in my mother-in-law’s basement outside Bangor. At the beautiful La Quinta in Texas. At a park in Reno.
I did finish another draft. It is sitting at around 45,000 words. Which is either 40,000 words too short or 40,000 words too long.
I’m up against some issues that are pretty common with writers of short fiction. Things are compressed. Some scenes read like screen-writing – all stage directions and dialogue. I’m missing interiority in some places and world-building in others. Perhaps I’m underutilizing the secondary characters and subplots.
If you write, I’m curious about your process. Do you go long and then have to edit down? Are you a pantser? Or do you plot everything out?
A few updates:
You can catch my latest story in the March/April Alfred Hitchcock Mystery Magazine. It’s called “Generous Strike Zone” and was written at my older son’s baseball practice. The editor of AHMM said it was “haunting.” You’ve been warned.
“The Best and Sweetest Things” is my second story with Sloane, a Portland-based private investigator. She’s going to be a fun recurring character. It’s out in the May/June Ellery Queen.
And finally, I have another Annie story out in the July/August Ellery Queen called “A Well-Worn Path.” This one takes place in Portland and involves the disappearance of a comfort care companion who happens to be a refugee. I wrote this story in November of 2024. It’s going to land a little different now.
For events:



- On March 15, I’ll be at the Kittery Dancehall for a Seacoast Noir at the Bar. Doors open at 6:00.
- On April 10, I’ll be at the Bloom & Doom event in Old Town at Kanu (283 Main Street) at 7:00pm.
- On April 15, I wish I could be at the Murder in Mud Season event at the Rockport Public Library. It’s going to be amazing. Doors at 6:00. (I will be in Reno. You know. For work.)
- On April 29, I’ll be in New York for the Edgars.
- On May 29 and 30, I will be in Portland for the Maine Crime Wave. It is going to be AMAZING. If you haven’t registered yet, you can do it now. Information is HERE.














Congrats on all the pubbing! I tend to finish a first draft around 80K and the end result adds another 5-8K. I cut some but flesh out a lot more.
80K on a first draft. Dang. Very interesting to learn your process.
Wow! That’s all very impressive! I miss writing short fiction. I had good luck with the confession mag market before they went belly-up, but I’ve never really tried short mystery (oh, except one time which did make it into an anthology out in San Diego). I did just pub a novella of 130 pages. That was an awkward length. For my Olivia Lively (Portland P.I.) mystery novels, each started out as a short story and then grew. I added second and third story lines—personal life stuff—and more characters and hoped to make them weave together somewhat thematically. Usually I pants it at first, but inevitably by 50% I need to plan out the chapters to make sure ends are tied up and for pacing, if that makes sense.
Oh – this is so interesting. My early, very messy draft was full pants. But then I did a really detailed outline and rewrote the entire thing. Two other POVs. One of the characters went from 27 to 17. You know. The usual things. Now I have a 45,000 word draft where I need to really think about how to flesh it out. Are you coming to Crime Wave this year, Shelley?
I’m in Guam but it’s possible I’ll be home for it! I should get a ticket just in case.
This is a tough one. Like Matt, I can now target 80k and hit it. (But my first full draft of Raven was 140k words. Yikes!) I have a sense of the full novel arc (a rough version of Freytag’s Pyramid) and then map out specific character arcs to make sure their development is complete and not under-resourced. I draft in Scrivener, which lets me move scenes around and insert placeholders for scenes I need to write so I don’t have to linearly go through the book again and again; I can see it holistically.
Very interesting, Robert. I remember you mentioning this process to me at Crime Wave last year. Very cool.
It’s a different headset, for sure to move between short stories and novel length fiction.
With my novels, I’m a pantser when I start writing, meaning I don’t do an outline or think much about the plot beforehand, but I do prepare detailed character descriptions (way more details than will ever make it into the story, so I really KNOW them when I start writing) and that kicks the book into gear. Halfway through I stop and break down what I have chapter by chapter, to make sure I’m happy with where I’ve been and have a good sense of where I’m going, Sometimes this causes me to back up and write a chapter (or two) to insert for pace, context or tension. By that point, the path to the end (90k words is my wheelhouse) is pretty well lit. Then, of course, the rounds of revision begin.
With short stories I’m a total pantser. A glimmer of an idea, then go! And then revise. . .
Sometimes it works. Sometimes not. But I love the intensity of having, say, 5000 words to tell the whole story.