What’s in a Name?

Plot, setting, characters, all of those elements go into creating a story. Plot and setting usually complement each other. Although, it’s true I’ve been colder in Florida than I ever was in Maine and hotter in Maine than I ever was in Florida. Last week, anyone? That’s the exception, and used well, an ingredient that creates conflict. Playing against expectation is always fun.

Characters are the bane of my existence. Not creating them. They usually arrive full-blown, warts and all. Naming them is my problem. I often want to shake them and beg them to tell me who they are. Instead, they laugh. Outside of fiction, I have never named a human being. And my friends who have had children stuck with family names. Precious little help there. As an author, Uncle Bancroft may have a place in the family hierarchy, but as a character, not so much. At least not without explanation. The only way I can picture him is sitting behind a mahogany partner’s desk puffing on a cigar. Great if I wrote British-style novels, not so good for the north woods of Maine or the Florida Keys.

There are two major considerations for naming characters. Location and generation. Saddling a character with a certain name evokes expectation. For example, when I was a kid, my mom bought me a Barbie game. Bear in mind, this was the early 1960s. The potential boyfriend names were Ken, Tom, Bob, and, inexplicably, Poindexter. No player willingly selected Poindexter. Even to a bunch of eight-year-olds, the name screamed nerd. I often wonder if Dexter Morgan’s first name wasn’t Poindexter. Look where it got him. Yes, names matter.

Names waft in and out of fashion. There are websites that list popular names by birth year and generation. My character, Sassy Romano, was born in the early 1990s. Sassy topped the list in 1994. Perfect for my character. Romano is her married name. She was born a Tremayne. While not a common surname in the Northwoods, it is an English name which sets it squarely in the Allagash. Her friends have surnames of Caron, Hafford, and Pelletier. All common in the area. Pairing local surnames with generation appropriate first names anchors the story in the Allagash and the St. John Valley.

Those same names would jar the reader if used in a Florida mystery. Spanish names are far more common in the area. Hayden Kent, my protagonist, descends from the Bahamian settlers of the Keys born of British stock. Her boss is Luis Alvarez. A man who has a hard time communicating in Spanish, but whose ancestry is clearly Cuban. Those names work in South Florida, but not in northern Maine.

None of this is to suggest that either area lacks diversity. That wouldn’t be true or fair. The truth of the matter is that character names provide a shorthand. A way for the reader to connect quickly with and identify characters. That’s not to say authors shouldn’t mix it up. That can be fun, and can serve a story purpose. But brief explanations should accompany the anomalies to avoid the reader wandering off.

There is one other consideration when naming characters. Variety for the sake of clarity. Shake up the alphabet and use those letters. Your readers will thank you.

About kaitcarson

Kait Carson writes the Hayden Kent Mysteries set in the Fabulous Florida Keys and is at work on a new mystery set in her adopted state of Maine. Her short fiction has been nationally published in True Romance, True Confessions, True Story, True Experience, and Woman’s World magazines, and in the Falchion Finalist Seventh Guppy Anthology Hook, Line, and Sinker. She is a former President of the Guppy Chapter of Sisters in Crime, a member of Sisters in Crime, Guppies, and of Sisters in Crime New England. Visit her website at www.kaitcarson.com. While you’re there, sign up for her newsletter and receive a yummy, authentic, key lime pie recipe
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9 Responses to What’s in a Name?

  1. Anonymous says:

    Picking names is most certainly a delicious puzzle to assemble!

  2. Anonymous says:

    I have found that sometimes the character won’t settle down and be written until I get the name right.

    Kate

  3. Sandy Emerson says:

    FYI. In my current WIP I’ve used an online random name generator for several characters. Using the eponymous website Random Name Generator (https://randomwordgenerator.com/name.php) I populated a delightful village woman’s round table group called the “Haven Harlot Hussies” who are rapidly taking over a significant part of the book. One can select gender, ethnicity and several other options. I’ve also discovered that the name so generated often inspires the character personality which emerges during the chaotic creative process.

    • kaitcarson says:

      1-glad to see you use the phrase current WIP. Looking forward to it.
      2-what a great resource. Never heard of it. Going to check it out. Thanks.

      • Anonymous says:

        1. I try to stay up to date on all the new-fangled stuff. Yeah, right!
        2. De nada.

  4. jselbo says:

    Great fodder for writing my short story – which I was trying to start today. Thanks

  5. John Clark says:

    One great thing about living in Maine is our plethora of interesting people. I often see someone and a first name immediately comes to mind. Case in point-when I was the library director in Boothbay Harbor, I saw a distinguished looking man walking in Pittston most mornings. He lived in a well kept house and always had the American flag flying in front of it. I decided his first name should be Thelston. He appeared in my second book of a YA fantasy series as the sole survivor of a failed mining colony.

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