Help! In Need of a New Cozy Title

Kaitlyn Dunnett/Kathy Lynn Emerson here. Last week, in a guest post at Wicked Cozy Authors, fellow Kensington author Maya Corrigan (https://wickedcozyauthors.com/2017/07/28/the-tell-tale-title-guest-maya-corrigan/#comments) talked about using crowd-sourcing to find good pun-laced titles for her food-oriented cozy mysteries. I am blatantly stealing this approach because in just one short month I have to turn in the proposal for the second book in my Deadly Edits series.

Yes, I know the first book isn’t out yet. It won’t be out until next June. But a “reasonably detailed outline” of the plot of Book Two has to be turned in to my editor on September 1 and it would really help if it had a title. Right now the file in my computer just says “Mikki #2” to distinguish it from the nearly empty “Liss #13” file. Liss #12, due December 1, has had a title, Overkilt, from the beginning, but it was my previous editor at Kensington who picked that one, not me. Don’t get me wrong. I like it. It just wasn’t my idea.

I think I’m pretty good at coming up with titles. I have a few I’m particularly proud of. Face Down in the Marrow-Bone Pie (written as Kathy) was a hit with pretty much everyone. That was the first of ten books to feature Lady Appleton, sixteenth-century gentlewoman and expert on poisonous herbs as the amateur detective. All the titles in the series start with the words Face Down, which has been good for branding. The Diana Spaulding Mystery Quartet set in 1888 (also as Kathy), used words related in meaning in the titles: Deadlier than the Pen; Fatal as a Fallen Woman; No Mortal Reason; and Lethal Legend. I can also take full credit for the titles of my (Kathy’s) two collections of short stories, Murders and Other Confusions and Different Times, Different Crimes. Kathy’s track record for coming up with titles in Mistress Jaffrey series has not been as good. Murder in the Queen’s Wardrobe was mine but Murder in the Mercery was changed to Murder in the Merchant’s Hall and Murder in a Cornish Kiddlywink became Murder in a Cornish Alehouse.

As for Kaitlyn’s titles, those in the Liss MacCrimmon series have been a mix of those I came up with and suggestions from two agents and three editors. I came up with Kilt Dead. My agent wasn’t enthusiastic about the original plot, but she loved the title. Since then, though, more often than not my original idea has been overruled by either the editor or the marketing department. I’m not complaining. My editor came up with The Corpse Wore Tartan and I think that’s one of the best. On the other hand, A Wee Christmas Homicide still makes me cringe. I kept pitching ideas to do with the Twelve Days of Christmas theme but none of them made the cut.

By now you’re probably wondering what happened to the search for a title for the new book. Let me do a cover reveal first. This is an early draft of the front cover of Crime and Punctuation, the first Deadly Edits mystery featuring Mikki Lincoln, a retired teacher who sets up as a free-lance book editor to make ends meet. There will be at least minor changes to the cover art before publication, if only adding a real quote where it says “a really good reading line here.” My original title for the book was Deadly Edits, which is now the series title. I can definitely live with that. It was my editor who came up with Crime and Punctuation—a perfect choice given Mikki’s new profession and the fact that this is a murder mystery.

 

In the process of finding a title for Mikki #1, the editor who bought it, the editor I now have, my agent, and I all came up with title suggestions. Once the decision was made for the first book, the best of the other possibilities went on a list to consider for Mikki #2. I’d really appreciate any and all feedback about these titles. Just post your opinions in the comments section below.

If anyone can think of a possible title not on this list, that would be even better. Post a new suggestion in the comments section and if I love it, I’ll send you your pick of any of my novels as a thank-you gift.

And now, without further ado, the current list of title ideas for Mikki #2:

KILLER COMMAS

MURDER REVISED

MURDER REWRITTEN

THE BLOOPER MURDERS

DEADLY TYPO

MURDERED WORDS

MURDER OF THE ENGLISH LANGUAGE

HOMICIDE WITH HOMONYMS

DEATH OF A NIT-PICKER

KILL YOUR DARLINGS

MURDER IN THE PRESENT TENSE

OXYMORON MURDER

THE STYLE SHEET MURDERS

LINE-EDITED TO DEATH

THE PROOFREADER’S LAST MARK

THE COMMA BEFORE CHRISTMAS

A FATAL REVISION

REVISED TO DEATH

CLAUSE AND EFFECT

DIAL M FOR MODIFIER

GAME, SET, SYNTAX

BRAVE NEW WORD

THE SENTENCE ALSO RISES

THE SOUND AND THE FRAGMENT

PRESUMED IDIOM

Kathy Lynn Emerson/Kaitlyn Dunnett is the author of more than fifty traditionally published books written under several names. She won the Agatha Award and was an Anthony and Macavity finalist for best mystery nonfiction of 2008 for How to Write Killer Historical Mysteries and was an Agatha Award finalist in 2015 in the best mystery short story category. She was the Malice Domestic Guest of Honor in 2014. Currently she writes the contemporary Liss MacCrimmon Mysteries (X Marks the Scot—December 2017) and Deadly Edits series (Crime and Punctuation—2018) as Kaitlyn and the historical Mistress Jaffrey Mysteries (Murder in a Cornish Alehouse) as Kathy. The latter series is a spin-off from her earlier “Face Down” mysteries and is set in Elizabethan England. New in 2017 is a collection of short stories, Different Times, Different Crimes. Her websites are www.KaitlynDunnett.com and www.KathyLynnEmerson.com

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17 Responses to Help! In Need of a New Cozy Title

  1. KATHLEEN PORTER says:

    Dead Draft
    Final Draft
    Commacide
    Dead Edit
    Manuscript for Murder
    Red Pencil Murder
    Criminal Critic
    Ghost Writer in the Glen

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  2. Barb Ross says:

    Red-penned to Death
    Literally, She Killed Him, Metaphorically
    Misplaced Modifiers
    Deleted
    Comma Spliced
    Proofed to Death
    Dangling Participles

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  3. Sue Hall says:

    A Palindrome Puzzle
    A Puzzling Palindrome

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  4. Barb Goffman says:

    I love Kill Your Darlings and like Murder Revised. Another idea I suggest is Final Draft.

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  5. Emily Wong says:

    Dot your I s , cross your T s or die.
    Cross your T s, dot your I s and die.
    Dot your I s, cross your T s , if you want to live.
    Grammerically correct crime of passion.

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  6. David Plimpton says:

    I like Clause and Effect.

    Looks like you’re getting some good ones, but how about:

    Deadly Colonitis

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  7. L. T. Bart says:

    I like Deadly Typo.

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  8. I really like A Fatal Revision. And the suggestions of Final Draft are good.

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  9. Melodie Gren says:

    Edited to Death (remove Line-), Edit ‘Til Your Dead, and I like Killer Commas and Revised to Death.

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  10. Karla says:

    STET The Weapon
    Drop Cap & Bury
    Permanent Delete
    Widows & Orphans

    I really like The Blooper Murders and The Proofreader’s Last Mark.

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  11. Lea Wait says:

    Final Draft — yes! Also like Murder of the English Language. And others on the list are good, too … I think you’re set for a long series!

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  12. Great suggestions and input. Keep those comments coming.

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  13. Revised to Death is my favorite. Can’t say why, but I love it.

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  14. Laurie Evans says:

    FATAL REVISION is probably my favorite.
    Having fun here…….
    ? Quoth the Editor, Nevermore
    ? Tale of Two Citations
    ? Of Mice and Metaphors
    ? Gone With the Publicist

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  15. COMMATOSE

    PROOFDEAD

    COPY DEADITOR

    PUNCTUATION MARKED FOR LIFE

    BULLETED LIST

    BULLET POINTS

    END QUOTES

    24-CARET COLD CASE

    UPPER AND LOWER CASE CASE

    ERASED AGAINST TIME

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  16. dragons3 says:

    I would suggest not using “Kill Your Darlings”. That was a movie title a couple of years ago — starred Daniel Radcliffe. Not a bad movie, but not great, either. There’s also a Rita Mae Brown Mrs. Murphy book entitled “Claws and Effect” so that might cause some confusion.

    Suggestions:
    The Sentence and the Fury
    Tempest In a Transcript

    I really like “Killer Commas”, The Comma Before Christmas” and “Murder Rewritten”.

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