Let Me Share Some Bad Advice

Kate Flora: As we enter another writing year, and may be making New Year’s photo-89resolutions which include finally writing that book you’ve always dreamed of writing, I am here to help you along on your journey, by sharing pieces of advice I’ve gotten over the years which have proved singularly unhelpful. I share them as a warning against the world of writing advice with this caveat: Some of them may work for you.

 

 

 

  1. If something you’ve written in your work-in-progress makes you cry when you reread it, excise it, cut it, leave it out. This is something I totally disagree with. I have some bits in books I’ve written over the years that still make me cry when I reread them. It just may be that there’s nothing wrong with powerful emotion in our books. If you have a section you’re worried about because someone has given you the advice above, try it out on a few beta readers and see if they think it should be cut.
  2. If you don’t know how to write, it’s necessary to take several writing classes and read lots of writing books. I think here the answer is: not quite. I love teaching, and yes, it helps to learn some craft and spend time in classes where you can get feedback from instructors and other students. But there is a downside–the risk that you will fill your head so full of advice about what the rules are (rules that often vary from one instructor to another) that you lose any ability to be spontaneous. There’s also the risk that you won’t be discovering yourself as writer. You won’t be developing a practice to get your writing done. You may be so wedded to prompts and assignments that you aren’t listening to your own imagination, exploring your own individual creativity, or learning what parts of the writing craft actually enchant you.
  3. Don’t write a word until you’ve written an outline. Not necessarily. If you’re a person who can’t tackle a project without an outline or some signposts to guide you along the way, then yes, do an outline. It doesn’t have to be the kind we learned in 6th grade. But may writers aren’t plotters but pantsers, and love the excitement of discovery that comes with waiting to find out what happens next. See advice in 2, above. You have to actually write for a while to discover what kind of a writer you are.
  4. You should pick a writer whose style you admire, and learn to initiate that. See my comments above. Learning to distinguish the elements of particular styles can give you tools in your writer’s tool box to choose from, but slavish imitation, sometimes unaware imitation, will come between you and the writer you’re meant to be.
  5. Don’t worry if you don’t have an idea today, write only when the spirit moves you, the muse appears, you’re inspired by a great idea. Nope. Despite the fact that we’re surrounded by those people who say, “I always wanted to write, but I tried it once and it was hard,” the truth is that writing is hard, but writers go to their desks and write on the days when their heads ache, when they’d rather rub themselves with sandpaper, when it seems like everything they write is gravel. Writing is a job–often a great job, but still a job, and so we go to work. This means you will be there, at your desk, fingers curled over the keys, at the magic moment when the fluttery little muse deigns to visit and whisper words in your ear. When you suddenly get into a flow so exhilarating you can hardly catch your breath. But we earn those moments by spending time with gravel.
  6. Read all the bestsellers in the genre you plan to write in, and then write a book like that. It’s sure to sell. Alas, although it’s true that agents and editors always think they want a book just like the last bestseller, only different, by the time you’ve spent a year writing that book, there will be a new new thing and your book will be yesterday’s news. You’re much better off writing the story that enchants you, that matters to you, that you can immerse yourself in. There’s no guarantee you’ll sell that one, either, but at least the journey will have been a good one.

I could go one and on, but that’s enough for today. Don’t be discouraged. Writing is hard, sometimes brutally hard. It’s also magical, and so addictive that even when the books don’t sell, or don’t sell well, we don’t give up. And my one piece of advice, learned the hard way through ten years in the unpublished writer’s corner: Be stubborn. Be your own best cheerleader. While it’s true that rarely will someone knock on your door and demand the chance to publish your novel, only you get to decide that you’re a writer.

 

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19 Responses to Let Me Share Some Bad Advice

  1. bereksennebec
    bereksennebec says:

    Great advice

  2. kaitlynkathy says:

    I agree completely. Writers learn to write by (wait for it!) WRITING!

  3. Wonderful advice. This is one of the posts I will print and keep for future encouragement.

  4. Barbara Ross – Barbara Ross is the author of twelve Maine Clambake Mystery novels and six novellas. Her books have been nominated for multiple Agatha Awards for Best Contemporary Novel and have won the Maine Literary Award for Crime Fiction. She lives in Portland, Maine. Readers can visit her website at www.maineclambakemysteries.com
    Barbara Ross says:

    The best thing about classes is not what you learn but the people you meet, who, if you’re lucky, will support you along your journey. But other than that, I agree with Kathy/Kaitlyn. You learn by doing. And doing. And doing.

  5. Laurie Graves – Maine, USA – I write about nature, food, the environment, home, family, community, and people.
    Laurie Graves says:

    Excellent advice!

  6. Lea Wait – Mid-coast Maine – I write mysteries - the Mainely Needlepoint, Shadows Antique Print and, coming in June of 2018, the Maine Murder mysteries (under the name Cornelia Kidd.) When I was single I was an adoption advocate and adopted my four daughters. Now my mysteries and novels for young people are about people searching for love, acceptance, and a place to call home. My website is http://www.leawait.com To be on my mailing list, send me a note at leawait@roadrunner.com
    Lea Wait says:

    You said it!

  7. Monica says:

    I have a shelf full of writing how to books. I sometimes think I just want to read books on how to write.
    Personally, I hate outlines. I like what happens next to be a surprise. However, my latest attempt requires that I have a timeline so I know who knows what when. It’s driving me nuts, trying to lay that out.
    My writing group has gotten used to me handing off my work for someone else to read out loud because I always cry when there is a deep emotional point in the story. If I cut that all out all I have is a murder and a missing kid. And everyone wondering why should we care?

    Thanks for your helpful advice!

    • mainecrimewriters
      mainecrimewriters says:

      I also have a shelf of writing books. Sometimes they don’t make any sense until I’ve been writing for a number of years. When I started out, John Gardner’s The Art of Fiction told me that I wasn’t a writer. A few years on, I was more confident and could glean wisdom from it. I think it’s important for beginning writers to know that if the book doesn’t speak to you, that’s okay.

      As for timelines, it is one of the critiques I wrote most often in a manuscript I’m reviewing: make a timeline. I have no problem, though, with making that timeline from the draft manuscript so I can go back and fix it. You can sometimes solve the timeline problem by a conversation with yourself, as in: Bill killed in the local forest at 11:00 p.m. on Thursday. Where was x at 11? y at 11? z at 11? and so forth. Having a conversation can make things so much less daunting.

      Kate

  8. Marni Graff says:

    Excellent advice, Kate—agree with all of them!

  9. mainecrimewriters
    mainecrimewriters says:

    Thanks, Marni.

  10. Judy says:

    Words that needed saying. It’s possible to become so obsessed with rules to the point of of paralysis.

  11. storytellermary – Mary Garrett, writer and storyteller, tells folk tales, humorous tales and personal stories. She shared stories with her students at Francis Howell North High School and has since told at the Kansas City Storytelling Celebration, Texas, Timpanogos (Utah), O.O.P.S. (Ohio), and NSN (national) conferences, the St. Louis and St. Charles Storytelling Festivals, the Greater St. Louis Renaissance Faire, day care centers, parks, scout events, elementary through high schools, and retirement communities. John Fussner, Mary's father, was the first storyteller in her life. She credits him with instilling the love of make-believe. Mary believes in the world of story and the power of story to make this world a better place. After experiencing Mary's stories, you can't help but take some of that feeling with you.
    storytellermary says:

    Heh, outlines . . . not all brains work that way. When a teacher required an outline for a paper, I’d write the paper ahead of the deadline for the outline, and then use the paper to write the outline.

  12. susanvaughan – Saint George – Susan Vaughan loves writing romantic suspense because it throws the hero and heroine together under extraordinary circumstances and pits them against a clever villain. Her books have won the Golden Leaf, More Than Magic, and Write Touch Readers’ Award and been a finalist for the Booksellers’ Best and Daphne du Maurier awards. A former teacher, she’s a West Virginia native, but she and her husband have lived in the Mid-Coast area of Maine for many years. Her latest release is GENUINE FAKE, a stand-alone book in the Devlin Security Force series. Find her at www.susanvaughan.com or on Facebook as Susan H. Vaughan or on Twitter @SHVaughan.
    susanvaughan says:

    Excellent advice, Kate. I’m sharing this with all the writers I know.

  13. marilynm – California – Marilyn Meredith is the author of over thirty-five books, including the award winning Deputy Tempe Crabtree series. She is also the author of the Rocky Bluff P.D. series. Her two latest books are Seldom Traveled and Unresolved. She's a member of Mystery Writers of America, Sisters in Crime, Epic, Public Safety Writers Association.
    marilynm says:

    Yep, you hit the nail on the head–though it does help if a person understands grammar. I’ve worked with many new writers that I suspect didn’t read much–reading does make a difference.

  14. jtzortman – Colorado Mountains – Author of "WE ARE DIFFERENT NOW" - A Grandparent's Journey Through Grief, first place award winning novel "FOOTPRINTS IN THE FROST", award-winning novel "SNOW ANGEL", and the three novellas in her The Drifter Series called JAKE - Whiskey, Water & Wildfire; JAKE-Winds of Change and JAKE-Echoes of Silence. The fourth book in the JAKE series is titled GHOSTED. Contributing author to anthologies "Felons, Flames & Ambulance Rides", "American Blue", "Recipes by the Book: Oak Tree Authors Cook" and "The Centennial Book of The National Society of Daughters of the Union 1861-1865". Numerous articles, poems and short stories published since 1990. Charter Member of the Public Safety Writers Association and member of Rocky Mountain Fiction Writers. Winner of ten writing awards. I live in a quaint Colorado mountain tourist town. When deep snows blanket the terrain and there are spectacular views from my windows, it becomes the perfect spot in which to write.
    jtzortman says:

    This is a fantastic blog and I agree with most of everything you say. I’ve had so much bad writing advice that it would make a nice book in itself. I think all the rules about how to write can totally destroy a writer’s true voice.

  15. Jasodhara And Premanku – Dugapur – Jasodhara and Premanku - Couple from India trying to find their ways to balance work, life and travel. Initially it was created and maintained by Jasodhara. Now It has become story of our escapades. Stay tuned for more.
    Jasodhara Batabyal says:

    These are really helpful. Thanks for sharing it. Please give mt blog a read too.

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